Lulu Bercerita

Jun 18, '08 12:53 AM
for everyone

Time to stimulate my brain with words through poetry Wednesday. Today, let me share you one of my poems ( phew this is my "first" poem I wrote since I wrote the last poem six months ago, I know, I know; it's been so long.) I willl drop by to yours as soon as I get the time; as my ISP seems to have been having some problems, and that cause me to fail to browse some sites ( multiply is one of them).

Sunset Secret

Sunset, sunset
What would you tell to the world?
Sunset and the unspoken words within
Are you being secretive?
How could you possibly console restless mind?

Sunset, oh my dear sunset
On the medium-speed train when my eyes were deceived,
By an excellent figure, gleaming eyes of someone.
Then I found rapture in his ordinary words
Having been drawn into your comforting tone of voice

Sunset exudes boundless love
You let me watch the days pass by,
YOu let me relive sublime moments,
Forgetting the crowd around
Then you and I were mesmeric.

What a beauty you possess!
Had my eyes been deceived once more?
or was it my mind reliving moments?
Perhaps, my heart was then planted by hopes

Sunset, my beautiful sphere!
Never has your beauty deceived me
Neither have the gleaming eyes, which were close to mine.
For it was I who was on a joyful state of mind planted by hopes,
All by myself

June 15th, 2008 - reliving moments
Lu2Ar

http://sanssouciblogs.multiply.com/journal/item/394/257

Now that you have read mine, I express my heartfelt appreciation to all people and my friends all around the globe.

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23 Comments

jayaramanms wrote on Jun 18

Yes the dishes are really delicious. You can make it at home.
Your presentation is superb. Beautiful poem on Sunset secret. also the Kenny G Sax song is my favorite.
Thank you for sharing. My entry for this week a poem - The White Mans Burden By Pablo Neruda - see at - http://tinyurl.com/5rxghb

luluone wrote on Jun 18

I think I will try Jaya, thanks for your presentation on the dishes:-)
By the way Kenny G has always been my fav, but I changed the music that suits to my poem better ( well I think) I will drop by to yours, have to get back to work. Thanks for dropping by too

sundarimichael wrote on Jun 18

Sunset - nama salah satu parfumku. hihihihi.
btw, lagunya keren. jadi ingat bapak2 di kampung manukan, waktu 17-an nyanyi lagu ini pake irama keroncong. duh syahdu.

cynta78 wrote on Jun 18

Hallo mbak Lulu yang cantik,apa kabar???.....

*Nice poem* & *Nice song*.......Love it....

haniehoneey wrote on Jun 18

waduh lu... bagus puisinya.. kalo liat sunset pasti always related to beauty :)

starfishred wrote on Jun 18

oh how lovely and the music goes so well with it thank you for sharing your great gift

kwika wrote on Jun 18

I love sunsets they are so different everytime and i like your poem very m,uch

djdx wrote on Jun 18

I enjoy sunsets also (once in a while sunrises...) and this music is very nice.

sanssouciblogs wrote on Jun 18

Music is great, terrific mood.
The poem is beautifully accompanied. We can always depend on nature for stability and support even when it appears chaotic, it is THERE, is IS.

The sunset becomes a lover, a hope, a promise.

Thanks for the lovely post, dear Lulu!

loish wrote on Jun 18, edited on Jun 18

Luluone: I really liked these lines - it really brought the feeling of the end of the day and for a little while, by being caught up in its display, letting the world around you drop away...

//Sunset exudes boundless love
You let me watch the days pass by,
You let me relive sublime moments,
Forgetting the crowd around
Then you and I were mesmeric.//

sweetpotatoqueen wrote on Jun 18

What beautiful thoughts these words of a sunset bring to mind! Well done! Thank you for sharing your work!

luluone wrote on Jun 19

haniehoneey said

waduh lu... bagus puisinya.. kalo liat sunset pasti always related to beauty :)

iya kalu sunsetnya sendiri, tp belum tentu dengan peristiwa saat sunset itu - bisa sedih, seneng, atau seneeeeeng banget.

luluone wrote on Jun 19

starfishred said

oh how lovely and the music goes so well with it thank you for sharing your great gift

danke, Heidi
I am glad you love the music

bostonsdandd wrote on Jun 19

Beautifully written about the sunsets in your life! Thanks for sharing it with us.

philsgal7759 wrote on Jun 19

So beautiful thank you so much for sharing these word pictures

luluone wrote on Jun 20

bostonsdandd said

Beautifully written about the sunsets in your life! Thanks for sharing it with us.

you're most welcome

luluone wrote on Jun 20

philsgal7759 said

So beautiful thank you so much for sharing these word pictures

thanks for dropping by.. I will check on yours later after work, see you

zafreud wrote on Jun 21

So sincerely eloquent!!! I feel pretty much the same about the sunset!...

lonewolfwithin wrote on Jun 21

i loved this, beautifully written! thank you for sharing!

luluone wrote on Jun 22

zafreud said

So sincerely eloquent!!! I feel pretty much the same about the sunset!...

Thank you. I guess almost everyone finds a bliss when seeing sunset

luluone wrote on Jun 22

lonewolfwithin said

i loved this, beautifully written! thank you for sharing!

glad you love it,
and you're most welcome. I love sharing it with you all

fluffyj wrote on Jul 2

"Then I found rapture in his ordinary words
Having been drawn into your comforting tone of voice."

That mysterious click when all things seem to fall into place for a magical moment... wonderful! -janeen

luluone wrote on Jul 2

fluffyj said

being hypnotized by something I guess,
Thank you Janeen,
How's everything with you?

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Music is great, terrific mood.
The poem is beautifully accompanied. We can always depend on nature for stability and support even when it appears chaotic, it is THERE, is IS.

The sunset becomes a lover, a hope, a promise.

Thanks for the lovely post, dear Lulu!

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Music is great, terrific mood.The poem is beautifully accompanied. We can always depend on nature for stability and support even when it appears chaotic, it is THERE, is IS.The sunset becomes a lover, a hope, a promise.Thanks for the lovely post, dear Lulu!

Music is great, terrific mood.
The poem is beautifully accompanied. We can always depend on nature for stability and support even when it appears chaotic, it is THERE, is IS.

The sunset becomes a lover, a hope, a promise.

Thanks for the lovely post, dear Lulu!